I wrote this poem when I was 14. I remembered being “heartbroken” when I discovered my “crush” had a “girlfriend”. Dont judge! We all had that moment in our life. 😄
So here it is….
If only you will see
The cheers and laughters you brought to me
If you’ll just look at me deeper
You’ll realize the truth and look at me closer
Nothing I can do
I never can regret
That your feelings for me
Is not what I expected
If only she was not in the picture
I’d rather own you and capture
Captivate you with my sweet smile
Until you’ll admire me after a while
But I know these are only my elusive dreams
which I fantasize over and over
Knowing you is nice, I remember
But having you is impossible, I can render
Showing and telling you
the thousands of If’s is fine
Yet all I want to say
If Only You Were Mine
~LunaShea
Wonderful! Loved it… 😊
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when i was 14, i was always confused when it came to poems!
And here you are, who wrote such a good one at 14 😍
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Thanks to my parents who made me read Shakespeares and different books at a young age. Lol. And I’d love to check your blog then follow you.: )
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This is beautiful and so true. It’s such a coincidence that you posted it today- the day when I’m going thru the same emotions. You have a really great gift of connecting your poetry with people.
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Aww thank you so much: ) im really intrigued when you said you’re going through the same emotion. Dont worry, there are still lot of fishes in the sea. :]
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Thanks 🙂
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Firstly, beautiful poem omg
Also, cmon, we all really did do it but then I read my poems a day later and went WHAT WAS I THINKING and ripped it
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First and for all, thank you. Second, been there and done that 🙂
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Firstly, its amazing!!! Loved it a lot 🙂
Secondly, Its so relatable 😉 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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Awesome.Keep going.
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Thanks 🙂
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks 🙂
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